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    @Vayman

    I like some parts of your text, but I feel it reveals too much at times.
    Concerning the picture, it feels out of phase and time. (/IPrefer CenterPoint + Nee2Earth)
    The picture there is too iconic, it reveals about everythings, it leaves no place to mystery on whats gonna happen. (there is a point to play with doubts in the textual part only if the picture does not clearly shows an answer)

    Context:
    We are post Order 66. /agree
    The Emperor is a normal politician, just a bit old and freaky. /methink
    Most people never saw a Jedi, even during the time of the Old Republic. They were just a rumor outside of the Core Worlds. The Clone War brought an end to it, they became an old superstition.
    The Battle of Yavin took place, but the people are mostly ignorant to the way of the force. Educated people have crashed themselves on the propaganda. Few knows the complete Truth.

    Additional thoughts:
    We must mention the Guardian of the Wheels from Rogue One.
    We should take a lot of liberty from the live story ( the Dathomirian Old Man.)
    Last edited by divlas; 05-01-2017 at 09:42 PM.

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